Free of any noticeable grammar errors, has complex characters and a unique writing style which leaves you craving for more, this is one of the WiPs whose progress I'm going to enjoy following the most :)
Charming and emotionally heavy story. The reader can easily relate to child MC through the struggles and the need to rebel against their mother's overprotectiveness and need to prove herself as a better mother than her own mother, who means well, yet is almost suffocating them.
In spite of that, she remains one of my favorite characters due to how complex her character is. I love how she never reveals her fears and vulnerabilities whenever MC is around, putting up a strong front so her child always feels safe.
Honestly, I'm not much of a sci-fi fan, but P-Rix was very enjoyable to read and play even for someone in my category. Not having a whole bunch of space lore-dumping from the start and the main character being so relatable helped a lot. P-Rix is in my top 3 character list with Yael from CRWL being first and Camille from EC coming third on the list.
The choice system is intuitive enough not to get an instant "Game Over"-like death if you pay attention to what you are reading. It's nice not having to constantly use the mouse/touchpad to click on an option. Playing with buttons is a special feature to have in a game that I've not encountered much in interactive fiction so... thanks.
P.S to other players: You can play P-Rix on a tablet just fine so go and enjoy being a space trucker in trouble🚀😓⏰
I agree with everyone that the game is AWESOME!!!!!
I love everything about this jester: their voice,their appearance and their personality💖. It has never happened to me to both love and want to punch a character in a game like them before😂
Only the word "MASTERPIECE" can do justice to this poem! Such beauty, such depth of emotion! You managed to make me immerse myself so much when I was reading it.I cried when it was finished😭.I love Leda and now I'm hoping you make a game with her as the protagonist (Could you do it please🥺🙏). Ah! And also the UI aesthetics fit the atmosphere of the poem so much.
I just finished the demo and I loved it♥! Your writing style is beautiful (reminds me of the way how movie scenarios are written) and your taste in colors (design).Was intrigued by the prologue, especially the starting scene. Dante's concern was touching and that line about protecting MC was quite cute.
You are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of your writing😊
The starting scene was chef's kiss,the story was enjoyable and GUI was aesthetically pleasing (I love your taste in colors and designs)!Also the name Echo is a beautiful name.I loved the demo and can't wait to read more of it😊.
The character creator was soooooo goooood! All the options that are made available for us to choose from will make MC feel more natural for us (at least it did for me).And your way of describing the eye colors is very unique. I liked all the costumization options.Thanks for sharing this😊
The Character Creator is amazingly well-done and your hard work shows! All the costumization options will make MC feel more natural for us.If only the preview is this good then I can't wait until the full demo is released!
I really liked the demo! In spite of it being short, the customization options and the brief interactions with some of the characters (Althea and I) were delightful (and funny too!). You have an excellent aesthetic taste as can be shown by the UI. Thanks for choosing the blue color as it is a soothing color for the eyes (for me personally)! Keep up the good work and good luck on further updates😊
